Since last year the 1805 high way has been having problems with fallings trees. State could never figure out why they kept falling. So he put a few video camaras out by the spot to see if he could catch the thing the that kept making them fall,but when he came back in the mourning to see, he found the camara had been smashed by a gaint pickle!
State was horrified he decided that he would find it if it was the last thing he did ! He took his giant watermelon house and his ruby red slippers and decided to camp out by the site of destress! State thought that it wasn't safe to sleep so he took toothpicks and pinned his eyes open.
While he was there he heard a strange noise. He looked out the giant seed window of his giant watermelon house and to his surprise he saw a hiant pickle smashing the trees! But it wasnt touching the ground! Could it float? Was he seeing things ? All good questions he decided he wasn't stayin around to find out!
State forgot all about his house and shoes and ran straight to his white car. he got in forgot all about his seat belt and everything els and tryed to drive off, but he forgot about the manuel car brake he put on his tires to keep his car from rolling. He couldn't move the car or his body, he was parralized with fear! As he looked to his right he saw an incredable sight! Tiny mice were swinging giant pickles around and knocking over the trees! They were coming this way! Just as State was about to open his door a giant tree came hurdeling down and crushed his car!
After States death the police station decided they need to put up a notice to warn people. They put up this sign to warn people of the falling trees . But since State died he couldn't tell anyone what was causing the trees to fall. To this day the people of 1805 highway still don't kno what is causing the trees to fall!
I really like that your character's name is State. What an awesome picture! Your story is very original and clever! Well done, Ashley! By the way, I really like your background!
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ow thanks im really sad that im leaving !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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